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Please upload your submission in PDF format.

 

START HERE: CUSTOMIZE YOUR PACKAGE

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Select the type of script you are submitting. Customizable options will automatically generate based on your selection. If your script exceeds the page limit, select the Additional Pages option at the end.

Prototype Feature

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Comprehensive, in-depth developmental notes on all elements of story that apply (structure, character, tone, narrative drive, format, plot, clarity, theme, voice, etc) with suggestions and solutions for improvement. Tends to be 7-10 pages in length. This package is great for beginners and those who really want a fine tooth comb taken to their script to get it industry or fellowship ready. Also comes with an annotated script that has been proofread for grammar, spelling, formatting, and general/specific suggestions. This is the Mariana Trench of in-depth notes!

A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

This option focuses on grammar, spelling, and formatting ONLY and comes with an annotated copy of the script with corrections. No story notes come with this option, it is for proofreading only.

ADD SECOND READ? (optional)

Want to edit your submission after receiving notes and resubmit? Pre-pay now by selecting from the Second Read Options to get 20% off a second read and analysis of the edited script.

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A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

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Add a second read and analysis for the same  script after its been revised for a 20% discount on the second read.

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Prototype Hour

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Comprehensive, in-depth developmental notes on all elements of story that apply (structure, character, tone, narrative drive, format, plot, clarity, theme, voice, etc) with suggestions and solutions for improvement. Tends to be 7-10 pages in length. This package is great for beginners and those who really want a fine tooth comb taken to their script to get it industry or fellowship ready. Also comes with an annotated script that has been proofread for grammar, spelling, formatting, and general/specific suggestions. This is the Mariana Trench of in-depth notes!

A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

This option focuses on grammar, spelling, and formatting ONLY and comes with an annotated copy of the script with corrections. No story notes come with this option, it is for proofreading only.

ADD SECOND READ? (optional)

Want to edit your submission after receiving notes and resubmit? Pre-pay now by selecting from the Second Read Options to get 20% off a second read and analysis of the edited script.

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A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

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Prototype Half Hour

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Comprehensive, in-depth developmental notes on all elements of story that apply (structure, character, tone, narrative drive, format, plot, clarity, theme, voice, etc) with suggestions and solutions for improvement. Tends to be 7-10 pages in length. This package is great for beginners and those who really want a fine tooth comb taken to their script to get it industry or fellowship ready. Also comes with an annotated script that has been proofread for grammar, spelling, formatting, and general/specific suggestions. This is the Mariana Trench of in-depth notes!

A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

This option focuses on grammar, spelling, and formatting ONLY and comes with an annotated copy of the script with corrections. No story notes come with this option, it is for proofreading only.

ADD SECOND READ? (optional)

Want to edit your submission after receiving notes and resubmit? Pre-pay now by selecting from the Second Read Options to get 20% off a second read and analysis of the edited script.

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A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

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Prototype Short

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Comprehensive, in-depth developmental notes on all elements of story that apply (structure, character, tone, narrative drive, format, plot, clarity, theme, voice, etc) with suggestions and solutions for improvement. Tends to be 7-10 pages in length. This package is great for beginners and those who really want a fine tooth comb taken to their script to get it industry or fellowship ready. Also comes with an annotated script that has been proofread for grammar, spelling, formatting, and general/specific suggestions. This is the Mariana Trench of in-depth notes!

A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

This option focuses on grammar, spelling, and formatting ONLY and comes with an annotated copy of the script with corrections. No story notes come with this option, it is for proofreading only.

ADD SECOND READ? (optional)

Want to edit your submission after receiving notes and resubmit? Pre-pay now by selecting from the Second Read Options to get 20% off a second read and analysis of the edited script.

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A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

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Prototype Outline

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Comprehensive, in-depth developmental notes on all elements of story that apply (structure, character, tone, narrative drive, format, plot, clarity, theme, voice, etc) with suggestions and solutions for improvement. Tends to be 7-10 pages in length. This package is great for beginners and those who really want a fine tooth comb taken to their script to get it industry or fellowship ready. Also comes with an annotated script that has been proofread for grammar, spelling, formatting, and general/specific suggestions. This is the Mariana Trench of in-depth notes!

A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

ADD SECOND READ? (optional)

Want to edit your submission after receiving notes and resubmit? Pre-pay now by selecting from the Second Read Options to get 20% off a second read and analysis of the edited script.

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A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

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Prototype Beat Sheet

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ADDITIONAL PAGES

IF APPLICABLE: Calculate how many additional pages your script is (not counting the title page) and select your option from the dropdown menu. If your script exceeds the page limits and you have not purchased 'Additional Pages,' the script will not be read. In this case, you may either purchase the proper 'Additonal Pages' or request a refund. If your script is 50+ pages over the guidelines please consider revising before submitting.

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EXPEDITE NOTES

Select this option to receive your notes within 1 to 2 days of full payment and script submission. Will only be redeemed for one script, even if multiple scripts are submitted.

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PHONE/SKYPE CONSULTATION

A Skype session or phone call can be arranged for those who want to talk more specifically about their script/analysis or just generally have questions and want some coaching or help breaking a story

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Please note: All submissions are subject to a small processing fee.

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START HERE: CUSTOMIZE YOUR PACKAGE

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Prototype Feature

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Comprehensive, in-depth developmental notes on all elements of story that apply (structure, character, tone, narrative drive, format, plot, clarity, theme, voice, etc) with suggestions and solutions for improvement. Tends to be 7-10 pages in length. This package is great for beginners and those who really want a fine tooth comb taken to their script to get it industry or fellowship ready. Also comes with an annotated script that has been proofread for grammar, spelling, formatting, and general/specific suggestions. This is the Mariana Trench of in-depth notes!

A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

This option focuses on grammar, spelling, and formatting ONLY and comes with an annotated copy of the script with corrections. No story notes come with this option, it is for proofreading only.

ADD SECOND READ? (optional)

Want to edit your submission after receiving notes and resubmit? Pre-pay now by selecting from the Second Read Options to get 20% off a second read and analysis of the edited script.

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Prototype Hour

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Comprehensive, in-depth developmental notes on all elements of story that apply (structure, character, tone, narrative drive, format, plot, clarity, theme, voice, etc) with suggestions and solutions for improvement. Tends to be 7-10 pages in length. This package is great for beginners and those who really want a fine tooth comb taken to their script to get it industry or fellowship ready. Also comes with an annotated script that has been proofread for grammar, spelling, formatting, and general/specific suggestions. This is the Mariana Trench of in-depth notes!

A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

This option focuses on grammar, spelling, and formatting ONLY and comes with an annotated copy of the script with corrections. No story notes come with this option, it is for proofreading only.

ADD SECOND READ? (optional)

Want to edit your submission after receiving notes and resubmit? Pre-pay now by selecting from the Second Read Options to get 20% off a second read and analysis of the edited script.

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Prototype Half Hour

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Comprehensive, in-depth developmental notes on all elements of story that apply (structure, character, tone, narrative drive, format, plot, clarity, theme, voice, etc) with suggestions and solutions for improvement. Tends to be 7-10 pages in length. This package is great for beginners and those who really want a fine tooth comb taken to their script to get it industry or fellowship ready. Also comes with an annotated script that has been proofread for grammar, spelling, formatting, and general/specific suggestions. This is the Mariana Trench of in-depth notes!

A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

This option focuses on grammar, spelling, and formatting ONLY and comes with an annotated copy of the script with corrections. No story notes come with this option, it is for proofreading only.

ADD SECOND READ? (optional)

Want to edit your submission after receiving notes and resubmit? Pre-pay now by selecting from the Second Read Options to get 20% off a second read and analysis of the edited script.

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Prototype Short

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Comprehensive, in-depth developmental notes on all elements of story that apply (structure, character, tone, narrative drive, format, plot, clarity, theme, voice, etc) with suggestions and solutions for improvement. Tends to be 7-10 pages in length. This package is great for beginners and those who really want a fine tooth comb taken to their script to get it industry or fellowship ready. Also comes with an annotated script that has been proofread for grammar, spelling, formatting, and general/specific suggestions. This is the Mariana Trench of in-depth notes!

A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

This option focuses on grammar, spelling, and formatting ONLY and comes with an annotated copy of the script with corrections. No story notes come with this option, it is for proofreading only.

ADD SECOND READ? (optional)

Want to edit your submission after receiving notes and resubmit? Pre-pay now by selecting from the Second Read Options to get 20% off a second read and analysis of the edited script.

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Prototype Outline

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Comprehensive, in-depth developmental notes on all elements of story that apply (structure, character, tone, narrative drive, format, plot, clarity, theme, voice, etc) with suggestions and solutions for improvement. Tends to be 7-10 pages in length. This package is great for beginners and those who really want a fine tooth comb taken to their script to get it industry or fellowship ready. Also comes with an annotated script that has been proofread for grammar, spelling, formatting, and general/specific suggestions. This is the Mariana Trench of in-depth notes!

A 2-3 page summary of the strengths and weaknesses of the submission in regards to story, character, plot, structure, tone, voice, narrative drive, etc. Not as comprehensive as "Developmental Notes," with less emphasis on "teaching" industry standards. Does not come with a "copy-edited" or annotated version of the submission. Proof reading for spelling/grammar is not the focus here. Additional pages still need to be purchased if applicable.

ADD SECOND READ? (optional)

Want to edit your submission after receiving notes and resubmit? Pre-pay now by selecting from the Second Read Options to get 20% off a second read and analysis of the edited script.

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Prototype Beat Sheet

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ADDITIONAL PAGES

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EXPEDITE NOTES

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PHONE/SKYPE CONSULTATION

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Untitled

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